HOLY CRAP I LOVED THIS SHORT STORY! MAKING HIM MINE BY DIANNA BELL TEACHES US A VALUABLE LESSON AS WELL AS BEING A WONDERFUL STORY!! HERE IS MY REVIEW, LINKS, AND A SHORT EXCERPT: LET'S GET TO IT:
THIS QUOTE IS PERFECT FOR THIS STORY!! HERE IS MY REVIEW:
Making Him Mine by: Dianna Bell
reviewed by: Becky
Kian is an extremely dedicated college student. A shy young man who is determined to reach his goals through hard work and dedication . He has no time for relationships. He is much too busy trying to make his dreams come true. He rewards himself daily for his diligence by visiting his school's cafe for his favorite treat. Kian also uses the visit to break from his strict self induced restrictions by admiring the sexy barista who makes his ice cream floats.
Hudson is perceived as a bad boy by all who sees him. At first glance, people can't help but to notice his multiple tattoos. The intricate artwork decorates almost every surface of visible skin. Then there are the well worn jeans, the band t-shirts, the leather wrist cuffs, and of course, the leather jacket paired with his signature steel toe boots. Those who don't know him, also had no idea about the sharp intelligence behind the rough exterior. They also don't know about his determination to make a certain shy little cutie his own before someone else can.
I love love love this story, and the lesson that you learn from it is so true, never judge someone based on how they look, judge them based on their actions!
Kian is s a shy little sweetheart who comes in the cafe everyday for his sweet treat, and also for some eye candy in the form of Hudson, the tattooed rock t shirt wearing god behind the counter! Little does he know said god has noticed him too!
Hudson looks forward to every day at the same time on the dot when Kian comes to get his Vanilla Creme Soda Float ( with one scoop of vanilla thank you ;p ) he finally decides to flirt with Kian and the little cutie freaks and darts away.
Can these two find a way to get together seeing as they both want it so much, and if so will Kian's conniving friend's throw a wrench in the works before these two can even get started?
Grab it friends, it is a wonderful short story for an awesome price! Thanks Dianna, for teaching us such a valuable lesson wrapped up in such an appealing package!!
the 5 vanilla creme soda float rating ;P
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GRAB THIS ONE TODAY, IT IS A WONDERFUL BOOK FOR A WONDERFUL PRICE! HERE IS AN EXCERPT FOR YA:
The bell over the cafe door dinged, and I looked up from the book I was reading and spied my shy little mouse. I looked at the clock and, sure enough, it was four o'clock on the dot, the time he usually made his appearance to the school's coffee shop. He performed his cute little routine cautiously, sticking his messy mop of chocolate colored curls through the crack in the door.
He looked from left to right with those bright, coffee-colored eyes that sparkled behind his thick, horn-rimmed frames. When he determined that it was safe enough or not too crowded, he timidly entered the shop with a stack of books clutched to his slender chest. One or twice I was able to spy the title on the textbooks, and it was obvious that the man was studying for some type of medical degree.
I tried not to watch his progress into the café as he quickly scurried across the black and white checkered linoleum floor, making a beeline for the order counter where I was waiting for the little beauty. But, of course, I completely failed as my eyes tracked him anyway.
"Let me guess. A cream soda float with one scoop of vanilla ice cream, right?" I confirmed his unchanging choice with a raised eyebrow before he had the chance to quietly stutter his order.
I watched the brilliant red flush overtake his pretty, pixie-like features before he timidly nodded, "Yes," then went back to looking anywhere and everywhere else, but at me.
Giving him a rueful smile, I turned away to work on his order. I had been trying to get him to open his mouth, to say anything other than the request for his favorite treat, but so far I’d gotten nothing, not even his name.SEE WHY I DID THE FLOAT RATING? HAHA THANKS FOR JOINING ME FOR MY REVIEW OF MAKING HIM MINE, GRAB YOUR COPY TODAY!!